the water glass, a poem

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by torian princess (The original Blakanadian.) on Tuesday, 10-Jun-2008 10:15:30

when I started this, it was cool, then it fell apart. Enjoy
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The water glass.

Never knew what I w as getting myself into,
didn’t see the shine.
Took a look into the water glass,
Saw deeper inside.
Then came to realize,
it’s more complicated than I thought,
more than black or white.
The water glass used to be empty,
now it's slowly filling up.
It's filling with hopes and dreams and asperations,
with life, cleaning itself up.
The heart is a water glass,
no more no less than that.
The heart is a water glass,
Filled with water because it never goes flat.

Post 2 by Miss Gorgeous (I'm going for the prolific poster awards!) on Tuesday, 01-Jul-2008 15:18:05

Hey, its pretty good. I like your idea. Try changing a few lines, but other than that its good. Try to expand more of this topic. I'm sure you'll think of something to add here or to replace some parts of it.